Busy day today

On to task number 2: Sliding is getting a complete makeover. The first part is making me nuts. I feel like I wrote it when I was 12. Need to do something about that. I still want it to feel like YA because it's from Brook's teen POV for the most part but...UGH! The second part is getting trashed. I have a great idea for what needs to be changed...just not sure how much sense it might make to readers. If you have read Sliding, PM me or comment below if you'd like to hear my new idea and are willing to give me an honest red or green light on it